Wednesday, April 2, 2008
Assignment 8 write-up
I have completed my letter based animation. I used a line from a poem I wrote. It says, "I bleed frail dreams from the moon's skin, the kind that burn out like stars." I feel like my animation is too cluttered and too busy. I wish I had simplified things down more and I also wish I would have incorporated the photo of the moon more with the text.
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I think that the font choice for yours is OK, the script style seems to fit the mood of your poem and the movement is OK. I think that the movement could flow a little better at some points it seems jumpy and Im not sure that is the right feel for this. The moon works with the subject matter and the combination with the text creates an atmosphere.
I like the Font you chose for yours, and the original font color, I was a fan of the green text, where you playing off the whole "the moon is made of green cheese" story? anyway, the rythmic swaying motion of your text looks good, it remidns me of plants blowing in a feild, or maybe even the rise a nd fall of the tide.
The moon was quit fine it went well with the moon. You should had used more verity in text and effects. The speed was nice, it flowed well.
I really like your type, speed, and quality of your piece. Your type movement is great though the type you chose does not work for me.
I really like your type, speed, and quality of your piece. Your type movement is great though the type you chose does not work for me.
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